Well...

At the risk of being a nogoodnik...

You've created an atmospheric fighter here, not a starfighter.  You have 
twin engines which have thrust along the longitudinal axis, which is 
nice, but you don't seem to have any reaction control thrusters... your 
figher couldn't turn in space.

Also, it could use more surface texture... greeblies, if you will. 
 Weathering, paint, unit markings... something.  Anything.

A good start, though!


Timothy Groves wrote:

>Created to illustrate a game book, though when it's inserted in the
>book, it's on a white backdrop.  (It just looks nicer against black.) 
>Comments?  Suggestions?  Tomatoes?
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