Thanks you two.

Yes, the woman needs some work. She is actually hovering,
and I have to tweak on her pose a little to make it look
more embryo-style...

As for the womans shading, thats a difficult matter. Right now I was
working with lightgroups, but I don't like that idea, because its not
like the objects should be lit differently. I'll have to experiment some
more with the subsurface-scattering...
Regarding her size, the hands should look like they were cupped around
her, but then gave way to show what he is treasuring. Needs work too.

Hand color: Definitely needs enhancement.

I'll remember these suggestions, after all, this is a WIP and it was
a first shot.

Hugo wrote:

> > The woman needs a little work; she looks sort of flat since the primary
> > light source is inside of her.
>
> I think she's too small.. ;o)  Seriously. Besides I'm not sure her feet
> touches the hands (?) because there are no shadow.. I know there's not
> supposed to be a shadow but anyway.. Besides, I think the hands are too
> grey, they don't look alive - or dead. Preferribly make the hand colour more
> warm.  :o)
>
> Regards,
> Hugo

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