Thomas Lake wrote:
> 
> Just kidding I'm no where near his level, especially artistically. Just
> always wanted to say that:-) Anyway I am proud of this image though.

Wow! Very nice! I especially like the wood floor.. is that procedural,
or an image map? (I'm guessing the latter)

I have a few quibbles, though:

A microwave above the stove instead of a fume hood? Strikes me as a bit
odd.. or worse than odd, knowing how clogged with grease and smoke and
dust those fume hoods tend to get. I predict that microwave will be
filthy in a year. This bugs me more than anything else.

The green bottle on the island seems to have an awfully narrow neck and
mouth.. or an awfully short one, if it's a wine bottle.

The light over where the window meets the ceiling seems far too dim. My
advice is to either turn it off (in which case you'll probably have to
brighten the lights under the cabinetry and use something like Kari's
dynamic range compression to brighten up the scene) or make it brighter,
as the scene is a bit dim to begin with.

The candle needs a flame.

Another level of radiosity recursion might help bring out the details
inside the open cupboard (or not).

-Xplo

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