Hi there!

Well, at first I want to say that the image looks really good, though I do
have some suggestions.

For one, the entrance area looks just too clean for me. Doesn't a crack
show up at some point of an entrance's history? ;)
And perhaps a metal door just in view (like in the upper right corner
of this image) would be nice, though I don't really know the style of
the building...

For the grass near the wall, you could try and decrease the amount of
blades successively, showing more and more of some irregular (iso-
surface or heightfield) brownisch dirt. Or perhaps you put some
rectangular stones, placed like 20 cm away from the wall, and in that
space you add some pebbles (an easy method of keeping that edge
looking well-kept ;).

And in my oppinion, the light should be more "area-lightish". The shadow of
the bars just look a little too crisp...

But, as said in the beginning, it looks great (especially that off-scene tree
throwing
a shadow, gives reality-feel to it).

Tim
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Tim Nikias
Homepage: http://www.digitaltwilight.de/no_lights/index.html

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