> Pretty cool :)
>
> I like it. The "smoke" looks really good.
>

Thanks!

>
> But I think you should put the pieces of the broken heart a little closer,
> because like it is, its a bit hard to tell that it is a heart broken in 4.
>

Well, the broken heart is placed in that fashion to put an emphasize on the
sentence it does not cover up...

See ya,
 Tim

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