It looks good. I know you want smoother shadows and by increasing the number
of lights used in the area light and possibly lowering jitter might help the
graininess, but the grain is very cool on that wall. I like it a lot. It's a
look I've been trying to get in other projects.

I'm not sure what the blue strip is supposed to be. Is it water? It looks like
it's under the gray grid. It's a good composition and the roof area looks very
interesting up there visually. I would like to see more of it by pulling the
camera back, or using a wider angle. I don't know what you plan on putting in
next. Is someone coming up the stairs? For some reason it reminds me of a
level in Oni.

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Josh English
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