"Tony[B]" wrote:
> 
> Short story by Leo Tolstoy (The Death of Ivan Ilych). I'm in a short story
> class at FSU. I didn't turn in my homework (creative response) on Wednesday,
> so I had to turn a very creative response on Monday. I stayed up till 5AM
> doing this. I should have used a higher max_trace_level. Weep with me. <17
> hours to render. I'm turning it in like this. No time for a rerender. :(
> 

The composition looks good, it has much potential IMO.  But the lighting
seems to be improvable, radiosity settings (if it's used, i'm not totally
sure) should have a lower error_bound, the sunlight should be smaller
leading to sharper shadows.  Furthermore i think higher contrast would be
more realistic.  

Christoph

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Christoph Hormann <chr### [at] gmxde>
IsoWood include, radiosity tutorial, TransSkin and other 
things on: http://www.schunter.etc.tu-bs.de/~chris/

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