"H.E. Day" wrote:
> 
> Narrowed the
> laser, rotated the Auto-cannon so the laser fades out within the frame.
> I like it.

Nice image, but... uh, what are the lasers shooting at? If they are
shooting at all? It doesn't seem to be any boogies there. That is my
conclusion since all the objects in the scene looks like have emerged
from the same kind of technology/culture.

If they are shooting at something, perhaps you should add a dark,
foreboding creature/spaceship of some kind. Alien to the inhabitants of
this obvious water planet?

If the laser is a ranging or measurement kind of thingybob ... never
mind that I asked... :-)

Merely just a suggestion...

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