> Did you forget to adjust the camera?  Both the blimbs and the station look
> distorted and strecthed horizontally.  Was the camera and the render size
> not in sync, maybe?

Hmm.  Seems to be a factor of the Direction statement.  I'll fiddle with it.

> I think the mist is a step backwards.  It's now just a smudgy blot in one
> corne.  Reduce it there and add some mist in the left corner again would be
> my vote.

I've already fixed that. :-)

> What's up with the green splotches?  If they're supposrd to be moss or
> something, they don't work.  They're both too regular and too common in
> color.  I'd expect lots of really small spots maybe, or something.

Ah.  They're not mist but random detailing (like the yellow stuff on the
station's banners)  The problem was that they were scaled too small.  I fixed
that after I saw the render.


> Going to the doubled deck again also doesn't thrill me.  The station looks
> so much more majestic with only one set.

Well, you may be right.  I'll give it a try.

> Of course, I seem to be in the minority, so what do I know?

:-)  Quite a bit.


H.E. Day
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