> I tend to agree with others in that the second platform seems to diminish
> the impact of the image - makes the first platform look less monumental
> and, well, enigmatic. Maybe you could use something else to balance the
> image (an island, a large moon, etc, etc) and/or shift the viewpoint so the
> platform is more centered.

Blimps.  Everyone loves blimps, right?

> I'd say the clouds still need some work, they are too bright and look
> somewhat solid (remind me of porcelain for some reason). Perhaps a little
> fluff along the edges would help...

Hmm. I think i have the clouds fixed to my satisfaction.  You'll see in the
next image. :)

H.E. Day
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