"H.E. Day" wrote:
> 
> Should I post this on the IRTC??  Is it good enough??

Well, I fail to see a distinct "Worship" theme in there, but this is a matter of
interpretation I guess.
Technically, there is very little to complain about. A few things that come to
mind:
1) While the overall colouring of the sky fits well, the clouds seem a bit fake
somehow - perhaps they need more detail.
2) The mountains in the background look too much like plain "gaussian bells", I
think some jaggedness a la the foreground rocks would make them more convincing.
3) As others have said, the shape of the Guardian is difficult to make out,
either it or the bridge should be a somewhat different colour. Also, to one who
has played way too much Starcraft, it looks distinctly Protoss :)

Oh by the way, that chasm doesn't look so wide; I'd just forget about the
Guardian and pole vault to Paradise... Unless both bridge and Guardian are
supposed to be huge; but they don't look that way.

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