<dis### [at] hlavacek-partnercz> wrote in message
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> An old graveyard in dry, dead land.
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> Thanks to Andrew Clinton for his splinetree include.
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Most of these things you are probably aware of, and some may become
irrelavent as you develop the scene.

1. The fog on the ground is far too strong - particularily for such an arrid
land

2. The stones are too regular, both in the direction they lean, spacing and
overall shape.

3. The graveyard as a whole is a strange mix of abandoned and maintained.
Assuming abandoned, the fence and stone posts need some serious distressing,
as does the stone-border around the tree. Roots should be distorting the
border and the gravestones.

4. When/if you cut back on the ground fog, the ground is going to need some
more detailing.

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