David Fontaine wrote:
> 
[...]
> 
> So if you have any startling revelations about scene layout feel free to
> let me know...
> 

Ok, let see ...

In general i like the composition, but one of the vehicles more in foreground
would be good.  Maybe consider placing the sunlight lower so the shadows become
a bit longer.  

I also wonder about the stripes on the terrain, some large scale turbulence
would be good.  

> I think these vehicles look suited to ice, whereas I put them in snow.
> Perhaps I should scrap half my work and split the components into two
> different scenes.

I think they look quite good for snow if it's not too deep.  Some traces
implying movement of vehicles would be nice.  

Christoph

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