the bread needs an inside and an outside texture.  the color you have
now is right on for the inside, you'll just need to add a porous
normal.  as for the outside, you are right, it's too white.  needs
golden brown.  if this is a regular hamburger, then i guess you won't be
needing sesame seeds on the bun, but if you decide to expand the line of
burgers you offer...

is the lettuce square?  never seen square lettuce before.  perhaps if
you made several cuts out of a cube and then used intersect with your
plane, you'd get a nicer shape.  these are all minor suggestions. 
overall, good job.  can't wait to see the final version.

Thomas Lake wrote:
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> A few things first, I am going to change the hamburger, right now it is
> too white and a little too flat, same for the lettuce. Also one of the
> french fries is sticking through the carton.
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