You need to use more lights in the area light. The plant looks good, but
the branches could be a bit more brown. The leaves are so small that the
fact that they're the same isn't too harmful here. The floor looks
strange. I don't know what kind of floor that is, and the bowl looks to
be to big for the plant, IMO

Josh

(Btw, you should attach your image to the message, not do it inline. Not
everyone can read messages like this and some people will ignore it
altogether because of it. )

Ian Witham wrote:

> Hi there,  I'm new to the pov-ray newsgroups... but you seem like a
> friendly enough crowd. With this in mind I have decided to offer this
> here picture for criticism.  Don't hold back, tell me how to make it
> the best pot plant ever... I was going for something like a Cantonese
> Lace. I used SplineTree and some scanned leaves for the plant, h.f.
> for the dirt, and csg for the pot. The area light shadow of the
> foliage looks even grainier on a less compressed image.. how can I fix
> this? (make nice soft shadows) Ian

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