I can't complain about the modeling/rendering technical aspects really. it's
nice work. I think if you want to take the next step, you need to work a
little more on the composition. When I look at this image, I start at the
top left and the wires lead me down to the droids. then the rail leads me
back off the image to the bottom left corner. The sunbeams on the poster
then pull me back up to the top left. I have to force my eyes over to the
dark part where the bum is barely noticeable. If my eyes do make it into the
dark region, they just get confused by that bright green thing which draws
significant attention away from the fact that there is a figure below it.
The spill (or urine?, naw, it looks kind of redish) is a nice hint towards
the drunk idea, but it is too little of a hint.

There's something about the droids being right in the middle that makes me
hear voices of past art teachers screaming "bullseye."

One question, are the droids finding him, or passing him by because they
can't see him either? are they heading away from the camera?

nice job though.

ross.

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