I don't get it. They all die, then one guy falls to his knees. What is
killing them? Some sort of lightning bolt or something? They look almost
like huge raindrops. Of course, if I was familiar with the book, maybe it
would make more sense.

Constructive comments: Severe lack of detail. How about a sky? Some
texturing on the ground. Maybe a mountain range and some clouds. Trees.
Texturing on the people. And the people kind of rotate into the ground.
Looks strange. Perhaps axis of rotation should be moved up a little bit so
they don't rotate into the ground but onto the ground. Plus they disappear
unnaturally (instantly). At least make them fade out or dissolve or
something.

I like the concept.

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Paul Vanukoff
van### [at] primenetcom


"Remco Poelstra" <rjp### [at] homenl> wrote in message
news:38BC6BD7.FA7AE24C@home.nl...
> Hi,
>
> I'm creating a symbolic animation of the midieval book "Everyman".
> I've created a mpeg of the first scene (3Mb). You can download it from
> www.beryllium.nu/~remco
> I also putted the source on the website, in case you want to take a look
> at it, but everything is in dutch. If you like to see a translated
> version, just mail me.
> I like to hear what others think of my animation.
>
> Remco  Poelstra

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