the onset of the atmospheric effect after the first hill is too sudden it
would have even more of that vast fertile world look if you softened it up a
bit now as for a big render i cant tell but here are some tips

snow on back mountains
more of a textured grass
maybe flowers sprinkled with a macro or something (but not too heavy)
go out side and look at the sky between the clouds i dunno what's wrong with
yours but something is
consider adding a few tufts of grass up front for a bit more of a depth and it
will help with composition

i may come off as hard but frankly it's damn good but don't stop


Abe wrote:

> Greetings,
>
> Another landscape. Clouds are scattering media type 3 used in MegaPOV
> (if you're reading this Nathan, thanks much for your media work!).
> Terrain was generated in HF-lab. Since I am working from an LCD monitor,
> the colors may be a bit off. Post processing note: this image here was
> reduced about 75% from the original render.
>
> Any comments appreciated, esp. in regards to atmos/cloud color, contrast
> and gamma (again my monitor).
>
> Abe
>
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