The problem is that it took 10 hours to render
Ken wrote:
>
> Lewis wrote:
> >
> > The BUSH
> > A LOT can be improved. Suggestions? (Grass?)
>
> It has character. One thing that kind of sticks out is the leaf size vs.
> the small branch diameter. If the bush had been recently pruned and the
> leaves we see are all new growth then the thickness and abrupt end of the
> brances could be explained. If this is a wild, unattended growth, there is
> definatly something wrong with this picture. The leafs attached to the
> trunk of the bush look out of place as well. If at all possible you
> should add the leaves at one greater recursion level than the one they
> are appearing on now.
>
> Grass and roots that enter the ground a bit lower.
>
> --
> Ken Tyler
>
> mailto://tylereng@pacbell.net
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