Ok, I'll pick up the image and commpare to my sax.

First, I don't know what sort of saxophone you are trying to build here, but I
assume it is and alto (compared to the viola and the horn)

1)
at the bottom, it feels very "cruched" or something, not the smoothness (may be
the light/shadows)
2)
There is a *cursing his bad english* "thing" for the thumb that should be
visible.
3)
A cork piece where the *cursing his bad english* (don't know the english name)
mouthpiece(?) is connected to the sax.
4)
Too wide angle at the end.
5)
Pull the end upwards a bit. it goes to about 1/2 the instruments lenghth
6)
Put it closer to the sax as well
7)
No way to control the instrument. Finger placing is where?
8)
I don't have a way to show you the delicate linage of the controlling parts.
sorry.




Thomas Lake wrote:
> 
> Spider wrote:
> 
> > Let me say this.. I play the saxophone, and that instrument you have there looks
> > good, if it is further from the camera... same goes for that horn...
> > the level of detail is too bad(My opinion)
> 
> What do you mean by this? First I don't play any musical instruments so there are
bound
> to be a few mistakes that a person who is aquatinted with the instrument will pick
up
> but I thought that I modeled quite accurate instruments. Perhaps if you could tell
me
> exactly what is missing? I'm not finished so I will be adding more things to the
Music
> Store, more instruments, if this is what you mean.
> 
> >
> >
> > Sorry, but I had to point it out here.
> >
> > Thomas Lake wrote:
> > >
> > > I have been working on this image for the past couple of days now. Its
> > > not finished yet, still quite a lot of work to do. But I thought, why
> > > not post it. A few things I should mension. The weird pattern on the red
> > > bezier patch is supposed to make it look rippled but didn't turn out
> > > quite right. The interments were modeled in Rhino then exported to
> > > Moray.
> > >
> > >  
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> > >  [Image]
> >
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> > //Spider
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> > What I can do and what I could do, I just don't know anymore
> >                 "Marian"
> >         By: "Sisters Of Mercy"

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What I can do and what I could do, I just don't know anymore
                "Marian"
        By: "Sisters Of Mercy"

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