Steve wrote:
> Nice atmospheric scene.
>
> I'd suggest that the boltx/rivets that hold the
> sign onto the door should be less pertruding.
>
> As others have suggested the water needs to be
> dirty and flatter and show some evidence of being
> distrubed by the falling rain.
Actually I tried to add some disturbance to the water in the form of a wripple
bump normal. However when I scaled it down it didn't look like raindrops
hitting the puddle but more like messy noise. So I left the normal scaled up,
that's why it looks like the wriples in the puddle come from someone steeping
in it and not from rain drops.
>
>
> Steve
>
> Thomas Lake wrote:
> >
> > Hi everyone
> >
> > I just signed on to this newsgroup and was looking at all the nice pics.
> > So I thought why not post one of my own. So here is one of the images
> > I've done. You can find others on my home page if you like.
> >
> > http://www.geocities.com/+AH4-thomaslake/
> >
> > --------------------------------------------------
> > [Image]
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