the textures are a bit dodgy, try moray's ballwood one for a good realistic
wood, put a white plain in below the desk, make the draw handles protrude
less from the draws, and maybe angle the lamp slightly.

three words - detail, detail, detail

also try the radioasity and AA (3x3 should do), oh an jpg are better than
gifs!!

sorry if i sound negative, but I expect honest, and usefull critism of my
work, and would not give any less.

so far so good, look forward to seeing it finished.

Rick

mdm### [at] postoffice2bellatlanticnet wrote in message
<36E989E5.BB0D712F@postoffice2.bellatlantic.net>...
>This is a desk.  It has a chair, and a lamp.  I've been having problems
>with the lamp, can't get the dome to work right, so I made a hollow
>cylinder.  Also, the pillows on the chair protrude through the back;
>They're too large to be the right size for the chair if I move them
>out.  Also, the spotlight is a tad bright; I'm working on that.
>I'm using Moray for the layout, and POV 3.1d(windows) for teh objects...
>Strangely, I can't find anything in Moray that does just colors.  (This
>will end up being a replica of my desk I'm now using, however, it's
>Black steel.  I'm not up on creating my own textures in Moray yet.)
>Just dropping it here for some criticism.
>Michael
>
>

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