This is very engaging, I can only nit-pick, but a few things came to
mind.
One is that all the roofs look just alike and the texture is a little
out
of place in the company of the other textures. I thought, even if you
wanted
to keep them shiny, to have four or five slight variations, to imply
ware etc. Likewise the white cylinders. If you could get just a hint of
moss growing on them, they would realy look at home in the trees. And
the
sky gradient is a little to curt, you can get away with it if you opt
for
other worldly colours, but going after the pink-orange to blue, we're
used to it here on earth and when it is not just right the difference
sticks out pretty fast.

Can't wait to see a second pass ....

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