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Nicolas wrote:
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> Can anyone gives his opinion about this image ?
It's quite good. No, I'm lying, it's damn good!
> And also possible improvement that can be done ?
But as always, there is little room for improvement: this is the reason,
why I have nil finished pictures: I just can't make them perfect :-(
The color transition from the sky to horizon seems to be a little bit
too rough, as Ken already pointed out.
Other thing, which could be improved, is the horizon itself: usually
horizon's illumination is highest in the sun's direction and drops from
there; in the direction opposite to sun horizon is not illuminated. In
Your picture horizon seems to be illuminated uniformly: the yellow
"ribbon" has same height from left to right, though it should be fall
(and become darker) in right side of picture. May-be little rotation
will help here, as sun is quite in left side and rising of illuminated
part over the sun in will not become too obvious? Of course I don't
know, how You made this picture, so maybe it will not work?
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