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Spider wrote:
>
> Hello pplz.
> For all those of you who have given me tips/feedback, thankyou.
> Here goes a final(almost) preview o the fireworks.
>
> The .inc file is ready, and will be uploaded in .text.scene-files. after
> this post is finished.
> As for the image, it has some 20k objects in it. Tree from wintrees,
> recursion level 7.
>
> HF is rather big, made in PSP.
> fog, and some explosions.
> I'm not alltogether happy with the red explosion to the right, it melted
> too much with the beams I put there, perhaps should have made those in
> another colour... :-(
>
> Well, here goes.
>
> //Spider
While the structure of the f'works looks good you seem to
have lost something from your first posts two these last
two. They look, I dunno, 2D where before they had a good
3D look. Also the intensity of the bursts are nor bright
enough considering the darkness of the setting. I don't
want you to think I am beeing overly critical here because
it is a great image. It just doesn't feel right somehow.
Maybe in your attempts to reduce the object count and memory
usage you had to sacrifice a bit ? I have been there and done
that.
By the way you may recall me telling you I was going to upgrade
my memory this last weekend ? I did - my system has 196 megs now.
Yes I am bragging and I don't care who knows it !
--
Ken Tyler
tyl### [at] pacbellnet
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