Graham Redway wrote:
> 
> Kyle,
> 
>         Each image gets better, but as Lance said there's too much ambient
> light washing the detail from the scene. Also the lamp seems to cast a
> square of light on the ceiling, or maybe it's just my eyes.
> 
> There appears to be a light in the corner of the room behind the bed,
> did someone leave the door open? Is that why nobody is in the room? Did
> they escape? Are we safe?
> 
> The wall texture is nice, maybe you could put an image map on it,
> marking the days off. |||| (I forget what we call them.)
> 
> Keep up the good work.
> 
>         Graham.
> 



Actually, I'm glad you noticed that light in the corner.  You were
exactly right in your assumption. There is in fact a door that's behind
the camera.  It's not open, it just has a barred window which looks out
to the bright hallway.  I forgot to mention that in my post, that may be
why the scene seems so brightly lit. 
	That light is giving me problems, like you said it looks too square on
the ceiling.  There's a spotlight that shines up, and a point light that
shines down so they don't look the same.  I need to find a way to fix
that....back the the grindstone I guess.  Thanks for the input Graham
and Lance.
			Kyle

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