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I felt downright bad when I saw your scores and that there were no comments
especially after you were so generous with comments and particularily generous
to me.  I remember I was about to write something and my mind just froze up.
I was having difficulty writing comments this time around and made just a
few.  For what it is worth I scored your piece 15/10/10 which put it in the
top third of my scoring.  I thought there was some interesting visual design
going on and I enjoyed you discussion of how you developed the theme.  I
scored 10 on concept because I couldn't really connect the discussion it with
the image.  In retrospect that may have been harsh.  The piece did do some
interesting things mixing concept and symbol.  I think I actually had it
higher then lowered it a bit to group your image with others I thought about
the same level.  Again, I think you have a good eye and a strong sense of
design. I particularily remember how the orange in the ;lower left and the
black ground worked against each other.  The 10 for technical was basically
cop out.  I wasn't sure what was intended and what you just settled for.

Again, for what it is worth,  I read every comment you made on people's images
with interest and amusement.  I think you made a very generous effort and were
not repaid in kind.  Thought I suppose contributions should not necesssrily
be "quid pro quo" ( like I know what that means ).

A short anecdote.  In the Nov-Dec round my image scored in about the same
place your current one did.  I knew the image had been heavily influenced by
the recent death of my father and I felt so estranged I was happy just to get
something done. It had technical problems, it went counter to the usual RT
mindset, and had not expected it to do well.
But I was reasonably satisfied with the image on a visual and expressive
level.  Recently I sent links of several of my lastest entries to some friends
who are painters but know nothing of raytracing or IRTC.  With no other
reference to go on except the links directly to the images, they picked the
Nov-Dec entry as their favourite.  The other entries didn't even get a
mention!

Anyway I thank you for posting and allowing me a second chance to respond.

-Jim

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>  As
> beautiful as the very intricate Grail cup entry was, I suspect that if
> the Grail exists it will turn out to be quite plain.

Actually that particular museum piece consists of two parts ( not well conveyed
in my rendering )  The cup is clearly an old and quite simple relic of crude
silverwork. The goldplated, silverwork reliquary is from later.  It is precisely
this juxtaposition of a simple crude cup with its elaborate later enshrinement
that lead to arguments that this could be "the holy grail".  The speciousness of
such a conclusion lead in part to my choice of this as a subject for "worship".
The design is now thought to most resemble a tenth century oil lamp, by the way,
neither a chalice or a grail.
/jc

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I've been working on digital images since a long ago, and I remember when I
entered for the first time in the IRTC (
http://oz.irtc.org/ftp/pub/stills/1998-10-31/scotilla.jpg ), I thought the
work I'd done was going to go right up to the top.
It wasn't, and I had not worked on it two weeks, but almost two months.
But I learned a lot from that.
The first thing was that I had to keep learning
The second was that sometimes you cannot get the connection between what you
do and what the other people see.
The third was to redirect all that angry to the next topic and try to do my
best.
The fourth was that when you expose your work to the others, you never can
be sure of the result, but is a great opportunity instead of keep it to
yourself and your PC.

the road your walk.
Keep it up.

Txemi Jendrix
tji### [at] euskalnetnet
http://home.dencity.com/tji

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1) I'd vote it low.

    ART & TECH scores: low because that collection of symbols doesn't look
like anything with depth (hey, we are 3d artists) but something that could
have been done with a paint program: was it a flying bucket, a holy mist, a
space womb--what?
    THEME: It looks like some kind of new agey, "all paths lead to God" theme,
which I don't care for.

2) So what if we vote it low

    I let low IRTC scores cripple my creativity for a while.  These are just a
bunch of volunteer amateurs and everyone has their head up their but over a
different issue.  There was a time when I was angrily offended that crisply
photorealistic but horribly boring images got higher scores than imaginative
and ambitious stuff, but hey I GOT OVER IT!  If it is really something that
*you* would print out on a T-shirt for your nephew or print out to hang on the
wall in your foyer, then by all means enjoy your creativity and don't let a
little nitpicking ruin your whole "vocation" of art in this form...

3) Practice !
    How does one get to Carnegie Hall?

Tina wrote:

> My interpretation of this feedback and lack thereof is that the IRTC
> audience considers my work utter crap.

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