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Hello folks
lacking inspiration but bounded indoor by the hot weather, I unburried an
old scene.
I rebuilt the aqueduct, recoded the growth of the papyrus plants, fixed
uv_mapping on the palmtrees truncs and added some human presence
comments, critics and advices are welcome :)
Marc
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"M_a_r_c" <jac### [at] wanadoo fr> wrote:
> Hello folks
> lacking inspiration but bounded indoor by the hot weather, I unburried an
> old scene.
> I rebuilt the aqueduct, recoded the growth of the papyrus plants, fixed
> uv_mapping on the palmtrees truncs and added some human presence
>
> comments, critics and advices are welcome :)
>
> Marc
Very nice! I love the lighting and mood. Is that even some foam I see on the
waves near the shore!? Great job!
For next steps, I think the aqueduct could use some grunge and a bit of wear and
tear. I looks like it's new construction, which is fine, but to me, I think it
would have more interest if it felt like it had been around a while. I think
the palm trees look a little too straight to me -- I don't live near palm trees
though, so maybe that's realistic.
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The lighting is just right. You've captured that peaceful time of the evening
very well. And Phoenix canariensis is one of my favorite palm species.
A couple suggestions might be to add a slight texture variation to the water
wheel, and it looks like the mortar between some of the stones is blurred out in
some areas. These are really minor points, since the overall picture is
beatiful. The plants are especially impressive!
Regards,
Dave Blandston
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Am 11.07.2010 11:37, schrieb M_a_r_c:
> Hello folks
> lacking inspiration but bounded indoor by the hot weather, I unburried an
> old scene.
> I rebuilt the aqueduct, recoded the growth of the papyrus plants, fixed
> uv_mapping on the palmtrees truncs and added some human presence
>
> comments, critics and advices are welcome :)
Incredibly beautiful!
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Nice (re)done, I remember that scene.
Great papyrus on the right.
Le 11/07/2010 11:37, M_a_r_c a écrit :
> Hello folks
> lacking inspiration but bounded indoor by the hot weather, I unburried an
> old scene.
> I rebuilt the aqueduct, recoded the growth of the papyrus plants, fixed
> uv_mapping on the palmtrees truncs and added some human presence
>
> comments, critics and advices are welcome :)
>
> Marc
>
>
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"Kirk Andrews" <kir### [at] tektonartcom> a écrit dans le message de news:
web.4c39b719bc5f15b73dfe7ea00@news.povray.org...
> "M_a_r_c" <jac### [at] wanadoofr> wrote:
>
> Very nice! I love the lighting and mood. Is that even some foam I see on
> the
> waves near the shore!? Great job!
Thank you I'm quite happy with the mood and the lighting :)
But the white crests -though they are welcome- are not intended and I don't
even know where they come from (specular?)
The wake is a height_field csg'ed (difference and merge) in the river plane.
>
> For next steps, I think the aqueduct could use some grunge and a bit of
> wear and
> tear. I looks like it's new construction, which is fine, but to me, I
> think it
> would have more interest if it felt like it had been around a while. I
> think
> the palm trees look a little too straight to me -- I don't live near palm
> trees
> though, so maybe that's realistic.
>
The aqueduct is suposed to be brand new... maybe in the next version some
years in the future...
There are some palm trees by here (very temperate climate) but not so tall
I made those after pictures like
http://www.palmdoctor.com/images/Palms/Phoenix_dactylifera2.gif
Now I realise the trunk texture is wrong, just wait 4 more years or maybe
less :)
But they are rather straight aren't they? :)
Marc
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"Dave Blandston" <nomail@nomail> a écrit dans le message de news:
web.4c39eb6cbc5f15b7966554e20@news.povray.org...
> The lighting is just right. You've captured that peaceful time of the
> evening
> very well. And Phoenix canariensis is one of my favorite palm species.
Thank you!
peaceful hours after(or before) 'oven' hours were where I aimed to.
The Phoenix were supposed to be dactylifera but I must confess I was to lazy
to grow date grapes
>
> A couple suggestions might be to add a slight texture variation to the
> water
> wheel, and it looks like the mortar between some of the stones is blurred
> out in
> some areas. These are really minor points, since the overall picture is
> beatiful. The plants are especially impressive!
The blurred mortar must be on the pillar on the left of the building.
There it is a mere bump_map and aa did a mean job there.
the rest of the mason work is made of height_fields. Once again I was too
lazy :-/
Thanks again
Marc
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"clipka" <ano### [at] anonymousorg> a écrit dans le message de news:
4c39f469$1@news.povray.org...
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> Incredibly beautiful!
Oh thank you I'm sincerely touched :)
Marc
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"Lightbeam" <st.### [at] freefr> a écrit dans le message de news:
4c39fcc8$1@news.povray.org...
> Nice (re)done, I remember that scene.
> Great papyrus on the right.
>
Thank you Seb, how are you? :)
About the papyrus I juste changed the way one plant grows and the way it has
variations in growth
Marc
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Excellent! I feel a bit fresher already :-) Nice work on this revisit.
Intriguing, the guy running through the noria gallery...
Maybe, in the distant future, you can add some small white buildings in the
background somewhere, and a few water birds?
Thomas
PS Maybe the TC-RTC will inspire you? Still time for The Time Machine....
;-)
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"Thomas de Groot" <tDOTdegroot@interDOTnlANOTHERDOTnet> a écrit dans le
message de news: 4c3ac0b5@news.povray.org...
> Excellent! I feel a bit fresher already :-) Nice work on this revisit.
Thank you Thomas :)
>
> Intriguing, the guy running through the noria gallery...
He is just late and runs to join his sister who is welcoming their dad
coming back home
> Maybe, in the distant future, you can add some small white buildings in
> the background somewhere, and a few water birds?
I thought of that but I have not yet found a model of ibis or flamingo
>
> Thomas
>
> PS Maybe the TC-RTC will inspire you? Still time for The Time Machine....
> ;-)
Oh Time Machine?
maybe I would have been going to have already done something in the coming
past ... or so O_°
Marc
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> comments, critics and advices are welcome :)
Nice. The lighting is fantastic!
I really don't have any criticism, nor advice.
--
~Mike
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"M_a_r_c" <jac### [at] wanadoofr> schreef in bericht
news:4c3ad4b4$1@news.povray.org...
> Oh Time Machine?
> maybe I would have been going to have already done something in the coming
> past ... or so O_°
You shall already have won back in 2021, if I remember your future
contribution right.
Thomas
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"Thomas de Groot" <tDOTdegroot@interDOTnlANOTHERDOTnet> a écrit dans le
message de news: 4c3b2760@news.povray.org...
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> "M_a_r_c" <jac### [at] wanadoofr> schreef in bericht
> news:4c3ad4b4$1@news.povray.org...
>> Oh Time Machine?
>> maybe I would have been going to have already done something in the
>> coming past ... or so O_°
>
> You shall already have won back in 2021, if I remember your future
> contribution right.
>
> Thomas
Oh so you have 8 arms and your 1st name is Paul? ;)
Marc
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"M_a_r_c" <jac### [at] wanadoofr> wrote in message
news:4c3990df@news.povray.org...
> Hello folks
> lacking inspiration but bounded indoor by the hot weather, I unburried an
> old scene.
> I rebuilt the aqueduct, recoded the growth of the papyrus plants, fixed
> uv_mapping on the palmtrees truncs and added some human presence
>
> comments, critics and advices are welcome :)
>
> Marc
>
>
Hey thats really really nice, beatiful colours, I really like it!
Cheers Dre
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"Mike Raiford" <"m[raiford]!at"@gmail.com> a écrit dans le message de news:
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>> comments, critics and advices are welcome :)
>
> Nice. The lighting is fantastic!
>
> I really don't have any criticism, nor advice.
Thank you :)
Marc
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"Dre" <and### [at] gmailcom> a écrit dans le message de news:
4c3b9500@news.povray.org...
> "M_a_r_c" <jac### [at] wanadoofr> wrote in message
> news:4c3990df@news.povray.org...
>>
>>
>
> Hey thats really really nice, beatiful colours, I really like it!
>
> Cheers Dre
:D
Marc
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Wow, great detail, textures, and lighting!
Signing in hieroglyphs is a nice touch, although as far as I know
the surrounding cartouche is reserved for gods and royalty ;)
And text placed in the left corner could be written right to left so
the symbols face the central observer (I think it's done so, e.g., on
doorways). But I'm no expert, just read one too many strange books.
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"Christian Froeschlin" <chr### [at] chrfrde> a écrit dans le message de news:
4c3c49d2$1@news.povray.org...
> Wow, great detail, textures, and lighting!
Thank you :)
>
> Signing in hieroglyphs is a nice touch, although as far as I know
> the surrounding cartouche is reserved for gods and royalty ;)
I SUGGEST YOU TO STAND NOT FAR FROM A LIGHTNING ROD FOR A WHILE, POOR MORTAL
BEING ;)
>
> And text placed in the left corner could be written right to left so
> the symbols face the central observer (I think it's done so, e.g., on
> doorways). But I'm no expert, just read one too many strange books.
Oh I did not know that thank you
Marc
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