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From: Bill Hails
Subject: Kotoji Take 3 [150 kB jpg]
Date: 23 Jul 2004 18:41:42
Message: <4101941f@news.povray.org>
I've been rather lax recently, finally got back to this.
Thanks to Giles Tran for suggesting the light group to bring
out the normal on the tree trunk.

I must again point out that the furthest backdrop of trees beyond
the bushes on the far bank and reflected in the lake *is* a
photo, I'll get around to replacing that soon hopefully.

I reckon there's still quite a lot wrong with this pic, but it's
been a while since I last posted. At the moment I'm trying for
good anti-aliasing for the reflections and AM2 helps a lot, but
not quite enough.

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From: marty one
Subject: Re: Kotoji Take 3 [150 kB jpg]
Date: 25 Jul 2004 22:20:00
Message: <web.410469c1262a56a528b8e2bf0@news.povray.org>
I like the concrete texture.

Bill Hails <bil### [at] europeyahoo-inccom> wrote:
> I've been rather lax recently, finally got back to this.
> Thanks to Giles Tran for suggesting the light group to bring
> out the normal on the tree trunk.
>
> I must again point out that the furthest backdrop of trees beyond
> the bushes on the far bank and reflected in the lake *is* a
> photo, I'll get around to replacing that soon hopefully.
>
> I reckon there's still quite a lot wrong with this pic, but it's
> been a while since I last posted. At the moment I'm trying for
> good anti-aliasing for the reflections and AM2 helps a lot, but
> not quite enough.
>
> --
> Bill Hails
> http://thyme.homelinux.net/


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From: Jim Charter
Subject: Re: Kotoji Take 3 [150 kB jpg]
Date: 26 Jul 2004 02:19:25
Message: <4104a26d@news.povray.org>
Bill Hails wrote:

> I've been rather lax recently, finally got back to this.
> Thanks to Giles Tran for suggesting the light group to bring
> out the normal on the tree trunk.
> 
> I must again point out that the furthest backdrop of trees beyond
> the bushes on the far bank and reflected in the lake *is* a
> photo, I'll get around to replacing that soon hopefully.
> 
> I reckon there's still quite a lot wrong with this pic, but it's
> been a while since I last posted. At the moment I'm trying for
> good anti-aliasing for the reflections and AM2 helps a lot, but
> not quite enough.
> 
> 
> 
> ------------------------------------------------------------------------
> 
Assuming the hanging branches are rendered the photo integrates well 
with the scene and does not comprise a major element.  The more 
bothersome thing for me is that water texture.  It gives a very 
attractive result visually but does not correspond to any water surface 
that I recognize.


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From: gonzo
Subject: Re: Kotoji Take 3 [150 kB jpg]
Date: 26 Jul 2004 03:14:01
Message: <4104af39@news.povray.org>
Jim Charter wrote:

> Assuming the hanging branches are rendered the photo integrates well 
> with the scene and does not comprise a major element.  The more 
> bothersome thing for me is that water texture.  It gives a very 
> attractive result visually but does not correspond to any water surface 
> that I recognize.

Yes, the reflection is as bright as, if not brighter than, the 
background. Seems like it should be darker, and the water should have 
some color. Most ponds like that I've seen have a green color that gets 
darker depending on the angle.

But everything else looks great! Textures & lighting are excellent!

RG


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From: Marneus Calgar
Subject: Re: Kotoji Take 3 [150 kB jpg]
Date: 26 Jul 2004 03:16:27
Message: <mn.d22c7d47cdf56380.14125@please.com>
Simply Great !!!!!!!!!!!

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http://www.darkskull.net

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From: Shay
Subject: Re: Kotoji Take 3 [150 kB jpg]
Date: 26 Jul 2004 10:17:06
Message: <41051262$1@news.povray.org>
Bill Hails wrote:

Excellent. The foreground leaves and object are great. There is a cone 
shaped subtraction in the left-hand leg. Is this intended? Looks out of 
place.

  -Shay


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From: Bill Hails
Subject: Re: Kotoji Take 3 [150 kB jpg]
Date: 27 Jul 2004 13:16:48
Message: <41068e00@news.povray.org>
Shay wrote:

> Bill Hails wrote:
> 
> Excellent. The foreground leaves and object are great. There is a cone
> shaped subtraction in the left-hand leg. Is this intended? Looks out of
> place.
> 
>   -Shay

It is deliberate, a first attempt at a "chip" out of the leg, but I agree
it's not good. I want to come up with a general way of adding random
imperfections to the lantern, probably some combination of trace() and
blob subtraction.

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From: Bill Hails
Subject: Re: Kotoji Take 3 [150 kB jpg]
Date: 27 Jul 2004 13:23:31
Message: <41068f93@news.povray.org>
Jim Charter wrote:

> Assuming the hanging branches are rendered the photo integrates well
> with the scene and does not comprise a major element.  The more
> bothersome thing for me is that water texture.  It gives a very
> attractive result visually but does not correspond to any water surface
> that I recognize.

The overhang is rendered (the leaves use image maps however) it's only
the very furthest backdrop behind the bushes on the far bank that is
a photo. Thanks for pointing out the water, I'll see what I can do.

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Bill Hails
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From: Bill Hails
Subject: Re: Kotoji Take 3 [150 kB jpg]
Date: 27 Jul 2004 13:24:14
Message: <41068fbe@news.povray.org>
gonzo wrote:

> Jim Charter wrote:
> 
>> Assuming the hanging branches are rendered the photo integrates well
>> with the scene and does not comprise a major element.  The more
>> bothersome thing for me is that water texture.  It gives a very
>> attractive result visually but does not correspond to any water surface
>> that I recognize.
> 
> Yes, the reflection is as bright as, if not brighter than, the
> background. Seems like it should be darker, and the water should have
> some color. Most ponds like that I've seen have a green color that gets
> darker depending on the angle.
> 
> But everything else looks great! Textures & lighting are excellent!
> 
> RG

Thanks! I'll take another shot at the water.

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Bill Hails
http://thyme.homelinux.net/


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From: Bill Hails
Subject: Re: Kotoji Take 3 [150 kB jpg]
Date: 27 Jul 2004 13:29:38
Message: <41069102@news.povray.org>
marty_one wrote:

> I like the concrete texture.
> 

I'm not sure, after all it's not supposed to be
concrete :-). It's slightly too plain and smooth, I might
add a shadowless light group to get more
surface texture, also it needs more in the way of algae
or lichen discolouring it. I'm happier with the nearby
rock to be honest. Still a WIP.

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Bill Hails
http://thyme.homelinux.net/


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