"Flaming Monarch" <fla### [at] gatescom> wrote in message
news:3C8### [at] gatescom...
> I have been making objects for about a week and playing with them and so
> forth, but I never made a real scene, so I compiled a few and here is my
> first one
Very good, I first modeled an altar, after an IRTC image I saw.
> the blue book is modeled after a guest book I once saw so it is supposed
> to be that shape.
> this was also a good exercise in the rotate and translate command
> please comment on whatever you want
Suggestions:
    -Change the colors form solid to (mabye) slightly of red*1 or blue*1.
    -Add highlights to your objects.
    -Try radiosity with fewer lights (say 1 area).
    -Normals, finish, ect (variance on texture)
    -Slight scattering media on the clear pens
    -Recheck your scaling on the pens, remember Y is up
    -Details on books, pens ect (text)
Great job for a first image.
>good or bad I like em both
> tx yall :)
> it has been the longest thing to render as of yet it took about 1.40 min
> so soon I hope to be topping some of your "oh it took me 15 hours to
render"

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