Isn't this your fourth "first" scene now..? Anyway - keep up the good work,
you're doing a lot better than I did when I started out. I especially like
that Nintendo image.

/ Martin

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no no this is the first scene with a bunch of objects
most of the other objects were just that objects like a cup
maby i'm not "hip with the lingo" yet but is scene a compilation of a 
bunch of objects Like a kitchen or something



also I didnt do the nintendo but it looks cool

Martin Magnusson wrote:

> Isn't this your fourth "first" scene now..? Anyway - keep up the good work,
> you're doing a lot better than I did when I started out. I especially like
> that Nintendo image.
> 
> / Martin
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>

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nice one ... but looks like you got a lot of light sources?
a few less might give you a more 'defined' picture

"Flaming Monarch" <fla### [at] gatescom> wrote in message
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> I have been making objects for about a week and playing with them and so
> forth, but I never made a real scene, so I compiled a few and here is my
> first one
> the blue book is modeled after a guest book I once saw so it is supposed
> to be that shape.
> this was also a good exercise in the rotate and translate command
> please comment on whatever you want
> good or bad I like em both
> tx yall :)
> it has been the longest thing to render as of yet it took about 1.40 min
> so soon I hope to be topping some of your "oh it took me 15 hours to
render"
> :)
> comment!
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hmm Ill try that after school
thx

Wolfgang Manousek wrote:

> nice one ... but looks like you got a lot of light sources?
> a few less might give you a more 'defined' picture
> 
> "Flaming Monarch" <fla### [at] gatescom> wrote in message
> news:3C8### [at] gatescom...
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>>I have been making objects for about a week and playing with them and so
>>forth, but I never made a real scene, so I compiled a few and here is my
>>first one
>>the blue book is modeled after a guest book I once saw so it is supposed
>>to be that shape.
>>this was also a good exercise in the rotate and translate command
>>please comment on whatever you want
>>good or bad I like em both
>>tx yall :)
>>it has been the longest thing to render as of yet it took about 1.40 min
>>so soon I hope to be topping some of your "oh it took me 15 hours to
>>
> render"
> 
>>:)
>>comment!
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"Martin Magnusson" <lov### [at] frustratedhousewiveszzncom> wrote in message
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> Isn't this your fourth "first" scene now..? Anyway - keep up the good
work,
> you're doing a lot better than I did when I started out. I especially like
> that Nintendo image.
>
> / Martin

Hey *I* did the Nintendo! :)

I really like the blue pen. The rest of the pens and pencils look kind of
chubby. The blue pen though looks really accurate. Could you make the ink in
it darker though?

Corey

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obviously you use only pure pigments for textures (apart 
from the wood) that saved you quite some time.
You may want to add some reflections on the cup.
Adding radiosity is another way to increase your rendering 
times, if you want to.
I had some trouble to recognize the caps of the pens.
They do not seem to fit on the pens.
The platic in the pens is too transparent and you forgot
the small hole in the side ;)
The pencils are, I think, too thick compared to the pens.

Apart from that, you are making remarkable progress.
If you continue we will all be complaining in a couple
of weeks that you should not publish photograhs.

	Andrel

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Remarkable!

I finally got to see the pencils / pens!!!

Keep up the great work :-)


"Flaming Monarch" <fla### [at] gatescom> wrote in message
news:3C8### [at] gatescom...
> I have been making objects for about a week and playing with them and so
> forth, but I never made a real scene, so I compiled a few and here is my
> first one
> the blue book is modeled after a guest book I once saw so it is supposed
> to be that shape.
> this was also a good exercise in the rotate and translate command
> please comment on whatever you want
> good or bad I like em both
> tx yall :)
> it has been the longest thing to render as of yet it took about 1.40 min
> so soon I hope to be topping some of your "oh it took me 15 hours to
render"
> :)
> comment!
>


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ya the color is a midnight blue
ill darken it up

lets see dont tell anyone this but the red and blue pens are the same 
except obvously the color/colour (whatever)

and the pencils are renderd in the same way
they look chubby because of the angle



Corey Woodworth wrote:

> "Martin Magnusson" <lov### [at] frustratedhousewiveszzncom> wrote in message
> news:3c8e0da9@news.povray.org...
> 
>>Isn't this your fourth "first" scene now..? Anyway - keep up the good
>>
> work,
> 
>>you're doing a lot better than I did when I started out. I especially like
>>that Nintendo image.
>>
>>/ Martin
>>
> 
> Hey *I* did the Nintendo! :)
> 
> I really like the blue pen. The rest of the pens and pencils look kind of
> chubby. The blue pen though looks really accurate. Could you make the ink in
> it darker though?
> 
> Corey
> 
> 
>

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Looks like you've used ambient in the textures on almost everything, try
removing it, and as someone else mentionted you've got quite a few light
sources, try taking a few of the lights away and moving the other lights
around. 

The pens and pencils seem to have a scale problem, make the thinner and 
maybe a bit longer. 

Nice placement of objects. 

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sphere{z*5,1pigment{rgb.5}finish{reflection.3specular.5}}box{<-50,-3,-50>
<50,-2,50>pigment{checker/*\__\\__/  * \_\\__*/scale 2}finish{ambient.7}}
light_source/*__\\__\\__\\__\\__\(    ~ )\__\\__\\__\\__\\*/{<2,5,1>*4,1} 
/*\\__\\__\\__\\__\\__\\__\\__\\__\~  -/__\\__\\__\\__\\__\\*//* Steve */

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"Flaming Monarch" <fla### [at] gatescom> wrote in message
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> I have been making objects for about a week and playing with them and so
> forth, but I never made a real scene, so I compiled a few and here is my
> first one
Very good, I first modeled an altar, after an IRTC image I saw.
> the blue book is modeled after a guest book I once saw so it is supposed
> to be that shape.
> this was also a good exercise in the rotate and translate command
> please comment on whatever you want
Suggestions:
    -Change the colors form solid to (mabye) slightly of red*1 or blue*1.
    -Add highlights to your objects.
    -Try radiosity with fewer lights (say 1 area).
    -Normals, finish, ect (variance on texture)
    -Slight scattering media on the clear pens
    -Recheck your scaling on the pens, remember Y is up
    -Details on books, pens ect (text)
Great job for a first image.
>good or bad I like em both
> tx yall :)
> it has been the longest thing to render as of yet it took about 1.40 min
> so soon I hope to be topping some of your "oh it took me 15 hours to
render"

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