I am wondering (after doing a few bock o' the envelope scetches in my down time... )
if
a nice background design might enhance it, maybe a solid color polygon (triangle
maybe)
offset to the left and visible through the negative space.  Again, just my $0.02 (you
can give me change if you like :-P

-paul

Josh English wrote:

> I'm not saying the design is bad, I love the design as well. Nor am I making a
> comment on Fabien's training. I have done professional design work, and I find
> having more than two fonts together distracting and ugly in general. In this piece,
> it is so small that the inconsistancies between letterforms is very distracting to
> me, that's all.
>
> Paul Jones wrote:
>
> > I don't kow, I kinda like to think that the visual arts are like the
> > aural arts, if it sounds good, it does not matter what training was
> > involved in it's production.... just my $0.02.
> >
> > I like the design....
> >
> > -paul
> >
> > Josh English wrote:
> > >
> > > Ugh. No offense, but the actual serious design training 've had recoils at
> > > this. Too many fonts in one piece. I like the general design, but there are
> > > what three or four fonts in this piece? Simplifiy it and It'll be a lot better
> > > in my opinion.
> > >
> > > Josh
> > >
> > > Fabien Mosen wrote:
> > >
> > > >
> > > >
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> > >
> > > --
> > > Josh English
> > > eng### [at] spiritonecom
> > > "May your hopes, dreams, and plans not be destroyed by a few zeros."
> >
> > --
> >
> > Paul Daniel Jones
> > 307 Chandlee Laboratory
> > Penn State Chemistry Dept.
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> >
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> >         /  \
> >        N    N
> >        |  O |
> >        C    C
> >       / \  / \
> >   H3C     C    CH3
>
> --
> Josh English
> eng### [at] spiritonecom
> "May your hopes, dreams, and plans not be destroyed by a few zeros."

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