Hi

My first try at something other than just checking out the features of
Pov-Ray

Still needs a lot of work though.

What do you think? ( any critique is welcome....almost!!  ; )


Peter

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"Enig" <eni### [at] homedlhdk> wrote :
>
> What do you think? ( any critique is welcome....almost!!  ; )
>

    Very nice, but there seems to be some confusion as to scale. If the
sword is on a table, then the shadow of the door is wrong. If the sword is
on the floor, then the companion blade on the wall seems a little too small
or the distance to the wall is odd. Or something....

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You're right about the sword on the wall.... although it's supposed to be
smaller (like all good thing, they come in two sizes  .... ; ) It is WAY too
small.

Another thing I just noticed: the Daikatana and acompanying stuff isn't "on"
the floor..shame on me... : )
Bill DeWitt wrote:

> "Enig" <eni### [at] homedlhdk> wrote :
> >
> > What do you think? ( any critique is welcome....almost!!  ; )
> >
>
>     Very nice, but there seems to be some confusion as to scale. If the
> sword is on a table, then the shadow of the door is wrong. If the sword is
> on the floor, then the companion blade on the wall seems a little too small
> or the distance to the wall is odd. Or something....

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It's still a neat render, even if the blurring is extreme.  Camera lens must
have a f32 setting on it  :-)  The blade looks fine to me and that's one of the
difficult things to make right I'm sure.

Bob

"Enig" <eni### [at] homedlhdk> wrote in message news:389225EE.CA308C3B@home.dlh.dk...
| You're right about the sword on the wall.... although it's supposed to be
| smaller (like all good thing, they come in two sizes  .... ; ) It is WAY too
| small.
|
| Another thing I just noticed: the Daikatana and acompanying stuff isn't "on"
| the floor..shame on me... : )
| Bill DeWitt wrote:
|
| > "Enig" <eni### [at] homedlhdk> wrote :
| > >
| > > What do you think? ( any critique is welcome....almost!!  ; )
| > >
| >
| >     Very nice, but there seems to be some confusion as to scale. If the
| > sword is on a table, then the shadow of the door is wrong. If the sword is
| > on the floor, then the companion blade on the wall seems a little too small
| > or the distance to the wall is odd. Or something....
|

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It is a good layout but I agree with the problem of scale...

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Thanks for the kind words

Bob Hughes wrote:

> It's still a neat render, even if the blurring is extreme.  Camera lens must
> have a f32 setting on it  :-)  The blade looks fine to me and that's one of the
> difficult things to make right I'm sure.
>

The blade was done in sPatch... it really is one of the best modellers I've tried in
a long time..

By the way does anyone have a good tutuorial (spelling?) of how to make a human head
with sPatch?

>
> Bob
>
> "Enig" <eni### [at] homedlhdk> wrote in message news:389225EE.CA308C3B@home.dlh.dk...
> | You're right about the sword on the wall.... although it's supposed to be
> | smaller (like all good thing, they come in two sizes  .... ; ) It is WAY too
> | small.
> |
> | Another thing I just noticed: the Daikatana and acompanying stuff isn't "on"
> | the floor..shame on me... : )
> | Bill DeWitt wrote:
> |
> | > "Enig" <eni### [at] homedlhdk> wrote :
> | > >
> | > > What do you think? ( any critique is welcome....almost!!  ; )
> | > >
> | >
> | >     Very nice, but there seems to be some confusion as to scale. If the
> | > sword is on a table, then the shadow of the door is wrong. If the sword is
> | > on the floor, then the companion blade on the wall seems a little too small
> | > or the distance to the wall is odd. Or something....
> |

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>By the way does anyone have a good tutuorial (spelling?) of how to make a
human head
>with sPatch?


http://www.geocities.com/SoHo/Studios/7415/

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Bob Hughes wrote:
> have a f32 setting on it  :-)  The blade looks fine to me and that's > one of the

More like f2.8 I'd say :)

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the Daikatana ???
explain ...

I feel as though the persons eyes i am seeing this through needs corrective
glasses..

Enig wrote:

> You're right about the sword on the wall.... although it's supposed to be
> smaller (like all good thing, they come in two sizes  .... ; ) It is WAY too
> small.
>
> Another thing I just noticed: the Daikatana and acompanying stuff isn't "on"
> the floor..shame on me... : )
> Bill DeWitt wrote:
>
> > "Enig" <eni### [at] homedlhdk> wrote :
> > >
> > > What do you think? ( any critique is welcome....almost!!  ; )
> > >
> >
> >     Very nice, but there seems to be some confusion as to scale. If the
> > sword is on a table, then the shadow of the door is wrong. If the sword is
> > on the floor, then the companion blade on the wall seems a little too small
> > or the distance to the wall is odd. Or something....

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This is nice for a first real image.  The colours are 
great, but the focal blur seems to have been rotarted
(I know this sounds daft but I know what I mean).

Keep up the good work. 

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