I like this image a lot! Great composition, and a very good-looking
watch and paper. But just a thought: if the lid of the watch is concave
(it should be I guess) then the reflection should be upside-down,
shouldn't it? Like when you look at yourself in a spoon?

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Martin Magnusson
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www-site: http://www.geocities.com/SoHo/9946/

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The biggest thing I notice right off the bat is the writing is modern script.

It is hard to tell what this paper is setting on.

Lincoln wrote the Gettysburg address on a train, nothing in your picture indicates
that aspect.

The original does exist, you might want to see if you can find a picture of the
document in a history book or somewhere.  A
more accurate rendition of the original would be more to my liking.

Regards,
Robert J Becraft
aka cas### [at] aolcom

Paul Swagerty wrote:

> After spending about 5 hours putting this image together I am actually
> fairly pleased with the result. This was the first render with the quill
> pen in the picture, and I dont really like that aspect of the scene, and
> the wood texture needs work.
>
> Comments suggestions
>
> Paul
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