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Every Tip is welcome. I don't like the wood, but I work on it.
Thanks,
Tilly
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This looks really promising!
The motorbile is great (even if I don't think it could stand like it does
now :)
My suggestions:
-the wood is too clean.
-the garage itself is too clean (but I suppose this is a wip so...)
-add more stuff, any kind of junk.
-are those two buckets of paint? I would put them on a table or something.
-keep up the good work!
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> Thanks,
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in news:3bbf38de@news.povray.org Tilly wrote:
> Every Tip is welcome.
You may have a scale problem in your scene. The ceiling and the door
seem to be too low and the door. The door could have the height of the
current ceiling and could probably be a bit wider.
Ingo
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A big greasy oil-spot ought to put some life in that scene, otherwise it
looks pretty nice...
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Tilly <web### [at] tabsnetde> wrote in article <3bbf38de@news.povray.org>...
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> Thanks,
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> Tilly
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> Every Tip is welcome. I don't like the wood, but I work on it.
Hmmm... great flourescents! I agree with the proportions issue,
something doesn't match... For aditions, of course a bench, more tools,
pieces, tires, big oil cans, wood or board boxes, etc.. I also think it
would be nice to have the bike parallel to the camera plane, with the
lamp on, to contrast with the fluorescent lights.
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the room is nice, but the wood does need work.
Love the bike!!
Gary
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> Tilly
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Tilly wrote:
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> Every Tip is welcome. I don't like the wood, but I work on it.
> Thanks,
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Nice, as others mentioned the floor could use some more structure.
BTW how about placing that motorcycle more in foreground?
Christoph
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