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> Here's a scene from a short film. Its based on the models I created for
a
> Pov comic-style story I started during my last "enthuse" with Pov.
>
> If you have any comments, I'd like to hear them.
Nice one, though a little short to comment much. The flying thingies in the
background should stir some dust, and the camera turns rather quick when
passing the robot.
Aside of that, I'd say add some more detail to the scene, some rocks,
vegetation or alike. I don't know how this scene is used in the short, but
maybe cutting it into three pieces might be good. One from behind, showing
us the robot's view, then one on his face, to show how he's looking at the
flying thingies. And then a third closing shot of the event, e.g. the camera
following the flying things and thereby passing the robot. Currently, it
seems like we zoom in on the robot, cause he's about to do something, but
then we just move on, leaving him do his thing.
Regards,
Tim
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