Difficult for me to see the motions the plane is going through with the
camera rotating around it.  Looks much more subdued than the first time.
There probably should be more elevation changes taking place.  What might
also be needed is for the camera itself to be jostled about as though from a
plane too or it might seem too choreographed.  Changing both location and
look_at using some deviation from the norm.  Could be that the motions would
get lost in the mix but something to think about if you haven't already.

Bob H.

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