"Cousin Ricky" <rickysttATyahooDOTcom> wrote:

> The perspective looks very weak--as if you used the orthographic camera.  I
> think the scene, particularly the cigarette box, would look better with a wider
> camera angle (with a closer camera location to maintain the composition).

I agree with Ricky regarding the perspective, and the box does have rather sharp
corners (it would look much more realistic just beveling those edges a bit). One
last suggestion - both cigarettes are identical (very noticeable in the tobacco
maps), but overall this looks great - I love the lighting.

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