Orchid XP v8 <voi### [at] dev null> wrote:
> OK, so I *think* I've taken nearly everybody's suggestions on-board.
> What do we think of this then?
>
> (The information about my degree is incomplete and possibly incorrect; I
> can't seem to find the transcript right now.)
>
> I've basically dumped in everything that seems remotely relevant.
> Presumably before I finalise this document I'll need to trim it back
> down again a little.
>
Getting better
Personally I would miss out the word bright from
How about;
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