Well, After finally getting the explosion down, and tinkering with a few other
scenes, I finally finished my first animation in a long time.

It's located on youtube right now, at:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9kIL4cqkg0M

Although the rendering is finished I still need titles and all, but before that,
I need critique.  I want to know what other people think of the story,
movements, actions, etc.  Basically, what's bad, and how do I fix it.

Any and all comments are welcome.  I really did this to get back in the
animating spirit in light of the IRTC's resurection.  As such, I want it to
turn out better than my first attempt at animation (please refer to IRTC round
ending October 2006, animation "The Visitors").  Again, any comments welcome,
and thanks in advance to those who do.

  --Nimish

----------------Citations etc.------------------
Animation Uses Rune's Particle System for Smoke
and Explosion and Weapons Fire
Ship Explosion employs Chris Colefax's Object
Exploder.

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