The main thing I have to say is that this is great. :-) I love that engine!
*Very* nice use of CSG. (The broken glass in the windows is nice, too.)

Off the top of my head, the walls could use some more stains. Presumably the
now-roofless shed has been exposed to wind and rain, and this should show.
Come to think of it, some extra twigs and branches spread on the floor
would be nice. If you're a little more ambitious, maybe add some
moss/cobwebs hanging from the ceiling beams?

I'm guessing that the green marbling is supposed to be moss on the ground,
but it doesn't look a whole lot like moss. It might pass for lichen. I
really like the moss clumps in the foreground--maybe spread some more of
those around?

The locomotive could use some better rust textures, but overall you did a
very good job with it. It's mostly the building that needs work, I think.

Overall, I'd say your appraisal is on the mark. Everything is superb except
the textures. :-) It's a very nice image so far--much nicer than most of
mine. ;-)

William

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