"Tim Nikias" <JUSTTHELOWERCASE:timISNOTnikias(at)gmx.netWARE> wrote:
> > Just a thought but would "Some things had best been left imperfect" be
> > better?
>
> Hm. Personally, I don't think the style of that sentence fits with the final
> statement "Because that's how he wiped himself off the earth."
>
> Might have worked at an earlier time, but now I guess I'm too attached to
> the current phrasing...


Hmmmm another varient, maybe:  "Some things would have been better... had
they been left imperfect."


PS Hurray, the system let me log on!  (It doesn't normally let me)
Charles

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