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"Garage" inspired by scene with a famous car in a similar setting. With
more light on the car I realise i realy need to fix the headlights and and
model a proper interior for the car.
Comments and critique welcome.
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Regards
Gerhard Oosthuizen
Cell: 079 773 5104
E-mail: nek### [at] gmail com
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On 03/31/2010 09:20 PM, Nekar Xenos wrote:
> "Garage" inspired by scene with a famous car in a similar setting. With
> more light on the car I realise i realy need to fix the headlights and
> and model a proper interior for the car.
>
> Comments and critique welcome.
It looks like the car is really angry.
Anyways, better than what I could have produced in a lifetime.
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> "Garage" inspired by scene with a famous car in a similar setting. With
> more light on the car I realise i realy need to fix the headlights and
> and model a proper interior for the car.
>
> Comments and critique welcome.
Already very nice.
The car might be sitting a bit far to the right, it couldn't have driven
thru
the garage door.
The hub on the wheel looks a bit deep, there needs to be room for
brakes inside there.
The wheel and emblem look painted, it might be better for them to
be more reflective, metallic.
There's a bit of overly sharp edges around the grill.
The interior looks fine to me, you can't see much of it anyway.
It might be worth modeling a simplistic camera-man for something
to reflect.
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The textures are so good I can't believe it. The metallic paint is awesome and
the fuzzy dashboard looks very convincing. The composition is perfect, and this
is one of only two or three images I've ever seen where I think focal blur adds
to the image instead of detracts.
It looks like a slightly overcast day, so it might look extra cool to turn the
headlights on...
Thanks for sharing your picture!
Regards,
Dave Blandston
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> "Garage" inspired by scene with a famous car in a similar setting. With
> more light on the car I realise i realy need to fix the headlights and and
> model a proper interior for the car.
>
> Comments and critique welcome.
Very nice lighting, textures and modelling.
The left front wing top crease line seems to have a dent in it.
It's not clear what's happening at the front grill, on the left side it
looks like two separate parts (one with a very sharp edge!), whereas the
right side it looks nicely smoother together. At the bottom right corner
also it looks like there is a stray pointy surface somehow.
I'm not sure if those wing mirrors are going to be usable at high speed,
they look like they will be vibrating around madly! But that's more car
design, not modelling...
The glass roof seems to bulge up too much on the right side of the image,
but maybe that's just an optical illusion somehow.
I don't think the lights or interior need any more detail.
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On Wed, 31 Mar 2010 23:42:15 +0200, Tim Attwood
<tim### [at] anti-spamcomcastnet> wrote:
>> "Garage" inspired by scene with a famous car in a similar setting. With
>> more light on the car I realise i realy need to fix the headlights and
>> and model a proper interior for the car.
>>
>> Comments and critique welcome.
>
> Already very nice.
>
Thanks :)
> The car might be sitting a bit far to the right, it couldn't have driven
> thru
> the garage door.
>
I'll take a look at that
> The hub on the wheel looks a bit deep, there needs to be room for
> brakes inside there.
>
There are brakes - the tyres are very wide :)
> The wheel and emblem look painted, it might be better for them to
> be more reflective, metallic.
>
You're right. I'm still getting the hang of MC-Pov's reflection settings
> There's a bit of overly sharp edges around the grill.
>
I'll have to redo that part completely
> The interior looks fine to me, you can't see much of it anyway.
>
> It might be worth modeling a simplistic camera-man for something
> to reflect.
Mm, yes maybe I'll take a photograph of some-one taking a photo with a
cell-phone :)
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On Wed, 31 Mar 2010 23:57:54 +0200, Dave Blandston <nomail@nomail> wrote:
> The textures are so good I can't believe it. The metallic paint is
> awesome and
MC-Pov does that for metallic textures :)
> the fuzzy dashboard looks very convincing. The composition is perfect,
> and this
> is one of only two or three images I've ever seen where I think focal
> blur adds
> to the image instead of detracts.
>
Thanks :)
> It looks like a slightly overcast day, so it might look extra cool to
> turn the
> headlights on...
>
Cool! Yes i used an hdri image called glacier.hdr so I guess it's quite
cold :)
> Thanks for sharing your picture!
>
It's a pleasure.
-Nekar Xenos-
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On Thu, 01 Apr 2010 09:28:25 +0200, scott <sco### [at] scottcom> wrote:
>> "Garage" inspired by scene with a famous car in a similar setting. With
>> more light on the car I realise i realy need to fix the headlights and
>> and
>> model a proper interior for the car.
>>
>> Comments and critique welcome.
>
> Very nice lighting, textures and modelling.
>
Thanks. That's a 2day 22hr render on MC-Pov :)
> The left front wing top crease line seems to have a dent in it.
>
I wanted it to blend from smooth to a crease. I'll have to figure a way to
fix it - it's only the normals.
> It's not clear what's happening at the front grill, on the left side it
> looks like two separate parts (one with a very sharp edge!), whereas the
> right side it looks nicely smoother together. At the bottom right
> corner also it looks like there is a stray pointy surface somehow.
I'll redo this part completely.
>
> I'm not sure if those wing mirrors are going to be usable at high speed,
> they look like they will be vibrating around madly! But that's more car
> design, not modelling...
>
=D
> The glass roof seems to bulge up too much on the right side of the
> image, but maybe that's just an optical illusion somehow.
>
It's perfectly symmetrical. The pillars are infinitely thin, so if I just
model pillars for the inside, it should look a lot better.
-Nekar Xenos-
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On Wed, 31 Mar 2010 21:32:54 +0200, Warp <war### [at] tagpovrayorg> wrote:
> On 03/31/2010 09:20 PM, Nekar Xenos wrote:
>> "Garage" inspired by scene with a famous car in a similar setting. With
>> more light on the car I realise i realy need to fix the headlights and
>> and model a proper interior for the car.
>>
>> Comments and critique welcome.
>
> It looks like the car is really angry.
>
=B->
> Anyways, better than what I could have produced in a lifetime.
Thanks :)
-Nekar Xenos-
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