On Mon, 22 Jan 2007 23:42:53 EST, "scam" <sca### [at] mailusydeduau> wrote:

>If anyone has any feedback or constructive criticism I'd love to hear it, I
>have no doubt you all at least pass the intelligent lay audience test :p

The animation look very good, great job on that.  As a presentation, there are two
things I would change, though.  First, the text is displayed for too short of a period
of time.  Second, it is
difficult to read the text and watch the animation at the same time.  What I would
suggest is to display the text a little longer, while the image is not animated, and
then animate the image to show
what you describe in the previous text.  It should then be easier to follow along.


Kyle

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