On 10-11-2014 12:17, s.day wrote:
> A good start, the character looks excellent and I really like the atmosperic
> effects with the sky/sun/fog and the snake like creature off in the distant.

Thanks Sean.

>
> I am not familiar with this character or story, who is the that at the bottom of
> the other ladder? Also do the other two ladders have missing rung's or is that
> an issue with the render?

For the time being, a stand-in. Missing rungs is a render issue. This is 
improved with stochastic rendering, although render time is much 
increased. I still have to experiment for the best balance.

The story is independent of any from the original stories, I try to 
incorporate my story into its universe.

Does the choice of scene attributes ring a bell? ;-)

>
> Not sure what else you are planning for this but the obvious thing for
> improvement is the ground texture and some further detail to be added in the
> foreground to make the scene more interesting but I like the current
> ladder/tunnel going further down.

The ground texture itself will not really be changed. It is supposed to 
be related to so-called 'patterned grounds' in periglacial areas. 
However, I have now added rocks etc. Maybe more is needed...

Thomas

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