On 03/29/2014 01:27 PM, Robert McGregor wrote:
> "Cousin Ricky" <rickysttATyahooDOTcom> wrote:
>
>> The perspective looks very weak--as if you used the orthographic camera.  I
>> think the scene, particularly the cigarette box, would look better with a wider
>> camera angle (with a closer camera location to maintain the composition).
>
> I agree with Ricky regarding the perspective, and the box does have rather sharp
> corners (it would look much more realistic just beveling those edges a bit). One
> last suggestion - both cigarettes are identical (very noticeable in the tobacco
> maps), but overall this looks great - I love the lighting.

well i managed to get the cig box edges beveled ... and indeed it does 
look better from quick renders. yep the camera parameters aren't settled 
yet, but i'm happy with the general pose of the scene. the lighting is a 
real wide spot/area light and hdr dome. maybe i'll reposition one of the 
cigs so the identical tobacco maps isn't so obvious ... thanks for the 
feedback

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