Stephen wrote:
> On 16/12/2010 4:12 PM, Darren New wrote:
>> Needs more professional voice-over,
> 
> I thought that the voice was fine.

Well, the recording itself could be better. Less gasping breathing, don't 
overload the microphone, etc. It wasn't the voice so much as the fact that 
he bobbled a few sentences that if it were a professional video would have 
been re-recorded.  The voice wasn't unpleasant. The performance was 
excellent for a youtube video, but wouldn't stand for (say) a television 
documentary.

Bobbled at 3m04s, bad breath break at 3m24s, bobbled at 3m37s, etc. 
Something that you'd certainly never worry about if you were listening to 
someone live (or free). Basically, he's trying to read and perform at the 
same time, not always reading far enough ahead to know where the "verbal 
commas" go, which professionals get around by only recording a handful of 
sentences at a time.

Since I don't know why Neeum is asking, I'm pointing out trivial stuff as 
well as any of the bigger things I notice.

-- 
Darren New, San Diego CA, USA (PST)
   Serving Suggestion:
     "Don't serve this any more. It's awful."

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