It's a laugh a minute in here...

"A degree is essential, not advantageous but essential."

...? It's not an advantage, but it is essentially? Perhaps you mean that 
it's not merely advantageous but actually essential? You're not 
explaining yourself very well.

"Ideally you will have 1 year as a team lead of managing projects."

Team lead of managing projects? I get what you mean, but that's some 
very strange grammar.

"The position is for someone who is interested in the progression to 
full team leader capacity. Hands on and hands off."

No idea what that last is supposed to mean. It's not even a complete 
sentence!

"We're ideally looking for someone who hasn't come from a small company 
and are used to large infrastructure."

"Someone" is singular, "are" is plural. Your grammatical numbers do not 
agree.

"Please apply asap to Tony Chapman. "

I'm reasonably sure initialisms are supposed to be capitalised.



I could spend all day just cateloguing all the grammatical issues I've 
found, but the overall impression is one of carelessness and 
unprofessional people. If you place an ad worded as badly as these, what 
does that say to people about your company?

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