Invisible wrote:
> Have a read. Point. Laugh. And then let me go and I'll crawl back under 
> my rock again and be quiet. :-/

Why would we point and laugh? It's very clear and well presented.

Nits: Your abstract has an "an" where you meant "a". Page 4 is missing a 
closing paren (and a space after "function"). The number of italics near the 
beginning for emphasis is a bit distracting, sounding more like you're 
enthused than scholarly. Exclamation marks similarly. Later where you're 
using italics to highlight differences between parallel sentence constructs 
it's helpful. On page 6, rather than "To see how we can achieve our stated 
goal", restate the goal: "To see how we can get both results returned..." 
"Suguar" is misspelled, as is "auxhilery", as is "grammer".  You mistyped 
"P_SueprChain()".

Add a concluding section, and explain in the abstract why someone might want 
to read the paper. These are two parts of any paper that are difficult to 
get right.

-- 
   Darren New, San Diego CA, USA (PST)
   Insanity is a small city on the western
   border of the State of Mind.

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