> A more direct inspiration

Citation needed. How do you know it's an inspiration?

>  is the comic book masterpiece

"masterpeice": opinion. "Original research."

> The main differences being that Watchmen's "villain" truly turns out to 
> save the world by way of his machiavelic plan and that no hero is truly 
> super: the only one with true superpower couldn't care less for mankind or 
> living organisms

Interpretation of the plot: original research. Implication of relevance to 
The Incredibles is also original research.

> Even the "no cape" is from Watchmen

Why say "even" unless you're trying to prove a point? Encyclopedias don't 
try to prove points; they state facts.

In addition there are a few sentences with poor structure or vague 
relevance. "is going on", "not in the watchmen movie though", and the "The 
Omnidroid" sentence.

Although you have some interesting points which would be good for different 
forums, the moderators were correct to remove this information as it was 
implying conclusions that could not be verified by external sources.

Also, I'm drunk. =D

 - Slime
 [ http://www.slimeland.com/ ]

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